Representation of Age - Assessment Point
Discuss the ways in which the extract below constructs the representation of age using the following:
This extract constructs representations of differing age groups.
At the very beginning of the extract a representation of middle-age is constructed through the character of the strict teacher. This representation is that of middle-age as possessing authority and power, with the character having control over other characters who are both teenaged and young adult.
A sense of enigma is created on this character's first appearance as we see a tracking shot of feet walking through tables from a low level. The absence of non-diegetic sound allows us to focus clearly on the noise of the character's footsteps. A cut to two teenage boys clearly shows them as behaving in a suspicious manner before we cut back to the feet steadily approaching. This juxtaposition constructs meaning for the audience as it becomes clear that the boys are keen to hide from the approaching adult, suggesting that he has authority over them.
A series of quick cuts adds pace to the scene before we see the middle aged teacher's face for the first time in close-up. The use of a close-up allows us to see an expression that has connotations of enjoyment as he passes judgement over the boys. He puts the boys under pressure by asking where they were as everyone else was 'suffering the screening'. This dialogue, an aspect of diegetic sound, helps to further construct his character as being a somewhat disillusioned and cynical representation of middle age. The composition of the shot where he questions the boys gives him power as he is anchored in the centre of the shot with the boys either side of him.
His character is developed through his use of sarcasm in the delivery of lines of dialogue such as when he finishes the first boy's sentence by saying 'holding his hair..' The actor's tone of voice, an element of mise en scene, is patronising and this character is developing into a very negative representation of his age group. His use of non-verbal commands, such as the clicking of fingers, and commands using the imperative tense, 'Give it!', ensure that the audience are aware of his authority, a fact supported through the character's costume with his suit, shirt and tie having connotations of power. Further interactions between the character and a young adult teacher reinforce his representation as middle aged authority.
A different representation of middle age can be seen at the end of the extract through the character of the maths teacher. When we first see him, there is non-diegetic hip hop music playing. The hip hop music indicates that he is trying to look "cooler" or even look younger. He says "are they meant to be like that" to the woman who is trying to help him. This shows that he doesn't know anything about fashion of the younger generation and that he cares of what others think of him. The woman replies to him saying "yeah!, its fashion innit?" showing that he cares of what others think of him. 2 students which are girls come along and start to laugh at him and saying "nice threads sir, i bet you robbed them off a year 10 didnt you?" this tells the audience that he may be dressing like a year 10 to look a bit more like a teenager. He then replies by saying "wonderful" this shows us that he is a laughing stock already and that he doesn't like the way he is dressed but it is possibly the best he is going to do.
At the start of the scene, the camera is at a low angle and then moves up revealing what character is actually dressed how they are and the use of non-diegetic sound manipulates the audience into thinking that the person is young but when they find out it is a middle aged maths teacher, the audience may possibly laugh because it was unexpected. The audience then finds out that he is trying to impress another teacher. We can see this because when she walks past he says "Eleanor, Eleanor is everything alright?" As he is walking besides her he does a different walk than we would normally expect from someone like him. He does this to try and 'show off' his new outfit. When she finally notices his outfit she replies with " you look ridiculous." This shows that he cares what people think about him. The caretaker then comes along and takes a look at the math teacher and says "Woah, you can't go into class looking like that!" The math teacher then admits that he looks ridiculous and that he has made a laughing stock of himself, the caretaker is trying to help him out and this can be seen when he says "bin that lot and stick to what your good at, Maths"
The maths teacher is seen as a complete polar opposite to the old teacher at the beginning, he is seen as a caring, kind and soft hearted person.He can also been seen as a character who cares about what others say about him in terms of what people say to him because when the 2 students start to laugh at him for what he is wearing, then he looks uncomfortable and a bit upset because they are not being nice to him. Whereas the strict teacher doesn't really care of what others think of him. Also when Eleanor says that he looks ridiculous, he looks even more upset and possibly annoyed because when the caretaker comes along, he says he has made a fool of himself and that he has possibly blew his chance. The caretaker can be seen as being caring as well because he advises the maths teacher to just be himself and to get rid of the ridiculous clothes he is wearing.
- camera shots, angle, movement and composition
- editing
- sound
- mise-en-scene
Here is an exemplar opening to this essay. Your task is to write the next section of the essay, focussing on the representation of age as constructed through the character of the maths teacher.
Read my opening first before then continuing the essay. Begin with the sentence highlighted at the end of my opening and move forward from there.
Exemplar Opening
This extract constructs representations of differing age groups.
At the very beginning of the extract a representation of middle-age is constructed through the character of the strict teacher. This representation is that of middle-age as possessing authority and power, with the character having control over other characters who are both teenaged and young adult.
A sense of enigma is created on this character's first appearance as we see a tracking shot of feet walking through tables from a low level. The absence of non-diegetic sound allows us to focus clearly on the noise of the character's footsteps. A cut to two teenage boys clearly shows them as behaving in a suspicious manner before we cut back to the feet steadily approaching. This juxtaposition constructs meaning for the audience as it becomes clear that the boys are keen to hide from the approaching adult, suggesting that he has authority over them.
A series of quick cuts adds pace to the scene before we see the middle aged teacher's face for the first time in close-up. The use of a close-up allows us to see an expression that has connotations of enjoyment as he passes judgement over the boys. He puts the boys under pressure by asking where they were as everyone else was 'suffering the screening'. This dialogue, an aspect of diegetic sound, helps to further construct his character as being a somewhat disillusioned and cynical representation of middle age. The composition of the shot where he questions the boys gives him power as he is anchored in the centre of the shot with the boys either side of him.
His character is developed through his use of sarcasm in the delivery of lines of dialogue such as when he finishes the first boy's sentence by saying 'holding his hair..' The actor's tone of voice, an element of mise en scene, is patronising and this character is developing into a very negative representation of his age group. His use of non-verbal commands, such as the clicking of fingers, and commands using the imperative tense, 'Give it!', ensure that the audience are aware of his authority, a fact supported through the character's costume with his suit, shirt and tie having connotations of power. Further interactions between the character and a young adult teacher reinforce his representation as middle aged authority.
Maths Teacher
A different representation of middle age can be seen at the end of the extract through the character of the maths teacher. When we first see him, there is non-diegetic hip hop music playing. The hip hop music indicates that he is trying to look "cooler" or even look younger. He says "are they meant to be like that" to the woman who is trying to help him. This shows that he doesn't know anything about fashion of the younger generation and that he cares of what others think of him. The woman replies to him saying "yeah!, its fashion innit?" showing that he cares of what others think of him. 2 students which are girls come along and start to laugh at him and saying "nice threads sir, i bet you robbed them off a year 10 didnt you?" this tells the audience that he may be dressing like a year 10 to look a bit more like a teenager. He then replies by saying "wonderful" this shows us that he is a laughing stock already and that he doesn't like the way he is dressed but it is possibly the best he is going to do.
At the start of the scene, the camera is at a low angle and then moves up revealing what character is actually dressed how they are and the use of non-diegetic sound manipulates the audience into thinking that the person is young but when they find out it is a middle aged maths teacher, the audience may possibly laugh because it was unexpected. The audience then finds out that he is trying to impress another teacher. We can see this because when she walks past he says "Eleanor, Eleanor is everything alright?" As he is walking besides her he does a different walk than we would normally expect from someone like him. He does this to try and 'show off' his new outfit. When she finally notices his outfit she replies with " you look ridiculous." This shows that he cares what people think about him. The caretaker then comes along and takes a look at the math teacher and says "Woah, you can't go into class looking like that!" The math teacher then admits that he looks ridiculous and that he has made a laughing stock of himself, the caretaker is trying to help him out and this can be seen when he says "bin that lot and stick to what your good at, Maths"
The maths teacher is seen as a complete polar opposite to the old teacher at the beginning, he is seen as a caring, kind and soft hearted person.He can also been seen as a character who cares about what others say about him in terms of what people say to him because when the 2 students start to laugh at him for what he is wearing, then he looks uncomfortable and a bit upset because they are not being nice to him. Whereas the strict teacher doesn't really care of what others think of him. Also when Eleanor says that he looks ridiculous, he looks even more upset and possibly annoyed because when the caretaker comes along, he says he has made a fool of himself and that he has possibly blew his chance. The caretaker can be seen as being caring as well because he advises the maths teacher to just be himself and to get rid of the ridiculous clothes he is wearing.

